literature

Note of I

Deviation Actions

Marbletoast's avatar
By
Published:
191 Views

Literature Text

I am
       Isolated
here
beyond the notes I recognize,
     the places I could sing,
     the people I could read
              and who read me.
It is not now a matter of learning, a matter of tuning, a matter of
         one
             broken
                string.
It is a matter of distance between the strings,
a space I can not fill with my own music.

They are lost to me

I am lonely on a chord

And I run to the end
            and drop.
Ah. Well. I am walking a very thin line here, stepping into overly personal and haphazard open form poetry--the deadly perils of free verse, where it becomes diary sop rather than poetry. But sometimes you do, you know?
© 2007 - 2024 Marbletoast
Comments7
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
ShimmeringDewdrops's avatar
Very abstract and emotional - conveying feelings of loneliness and longing for what cannot be with you. Well done! :)